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Tattoos and the fact that I don't care

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Heidi tapped her fingers on the bar as she called back into the kitchen "Otto is that chicken plate ever coming?" She sighed as exasperated grunting came out from the kitchen. She leaned on to the bar and continued to tap her fingers impatiently. "Ma'am!" She heard a dishearten call from a man how was covered in juice. She hustled over to the table to see an angry gentleman with his wife and 3 kids. She looked at the family who seemed very tired. The mother had a head wrap on with her short blonde hair tucked underneath trying to hide from the vomit, baby food and house cleaner. The oldest was a bored looking teenage boy who had a raised eyebrow at the spill at the other end of the booth not even trying to help. The 2nd oldest seemed like a four year old yelping due to the Barbie knock off who had the juice on its hair. The youngest was about three and she continued to cry for forgiveness. She looked beside her to a very anger looking mid 30s man who obviously was seriously missing his frat boy days and grew up too fast, he seemed worn down and upset, probably due to the lap of juice. The crying girl softly mumbled "Sorry." Over and over but the confusion over took her apologies. Heidi smiled and mopped it up. The mother sighed "We dont leave the house very often I am very sorry." She shook her head and slid out of the booth and took the 4 year old to clean up her Barbie. The father looked like he was going to hit the girl but looked around and sighed. Heidi looked at the girl sniffling sadly. She finished wiping up it juice and the man stormed off to the mens room. Heidi sat in the booth with the girl "Hey, it is all okay." The girl looked up "No it is not." Heidi sighed "You know I once spilled a whole plate of lasagna in my dads lap." The girl wiped her nose on her sleeve "Did he hit you?" Heidi pursed her lips "No, he just understood it was an accident." She nodded "I wish it was like that." The dad and mother came back both yelling down each other "I DID NOT PAY TO BE EMBARRASED BY THAT!" He gruffly pointed at the girl and she looked down. The mother sighed losing the argument "I am sorry I dont know what to do now." He glared at Heidi "I need that check. Now." She nodded and pulled the ticket off the pad and he went to the cashier. The mom took the 4 year old and the teenager followed behind as the girl hurried behind. Heidi unclipped her hair clip and handed it to the girl. It was yellow with a pink rose. The girls face lit up and Heidi winked. She trotted back to the bar and put the chicken, a beef, and some salads, she set the plates on the platter. And carried it over to the costumers and smiled, for the 1000th time today. She took the platter and sat at the bar. She noticed a man at the end and walked over "Can I get you something sir?" He looked at her "No I think I am quite fine." She nodded and sat beside him, she motioned to the book he read causally "Never read that. What is it about?" The man sat the book on his knee. "It is Breakfast at Tiffanys. Expect the book." Heidi nodded at him "Hmm I like the-" Heidi turned to the restaurant to heard a call and she walked to a table and gave them a straw from her pouch. They thanked her and she sat on the opposite side of the counter "So what is it about?" He smiled and looked over his glasses. She held her head to one side and examined him; he was around 24 and had a sweater and khakis on. He had shaggy brown hair and glasses on the end of his nose. "It is about a 1940s call-girl and her adventures with her neighbor." She nodded and leaned over the bar "Does the neighbor have a name?" He shook his head "No, he is never named." Heidi looked at him again and nodded. The chef yelled out of the window "Miss Golightly are you coming for this?" HE jerked his hand at a salmon plate. She sighed and shrugged out of dislike, her eyes looked up, and she held out a finger "One moment." She tossed her head back "I am taking my break!!" He grunted and she turned back to the man who was laughing "What ever is it?" He laughed, "What is your name? She lifted her eyebrow "Heidi. Heidi Golightly. 23, single." He shook his head laughingas she became worried. He held the book up "The woman, whom tells the story, name is Holly Golightly." Heidi smirked "Is she lovely?" He nodded "And charming." She straightens up "Well I am also charming, and your name?" The man laughed "Toby Ewing. (this is Sammy with a new name) 26 and single as well." Heidi smiled "That is lovely, darling." He drank some coffee "I have no idea what you are into, but an outdoor theater is doing Breakfast at Tiffanys tonight and if you-" Heidi jumped up "A theater? Wow that sounds amazing!" She ducked under the counter, popping up on the other side looking at him "Are you asking me on a date?" He shrugged "Are you accepting my offer for a date?" Heidi smiled deviously "I am if that is your offer Mr. Ewing." He smiled "Then it is a date." She pulled off a paper from her bill pad. She scribbled an address down and ripped it off. She offered the paper to him, and he reached out for it. him. "So I will expect you at?" He thought for a minute "Umm about 6." She kissed his cheek "See you!" She spun in a circle and danced to a table. He sipped his coffee again, faintly hearing "Welcome, what can I get you to eat?" and thought about the interesting character that he had just met.



-- Edited by sophiana tsuki on Thursday 1st of October 2009 06:17:25 PM

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I really really like it, but it gets a little confusing with out "" around what they say, but last time you said it copies and pastes weird, so I think it must have something to do with that.

Love it, though, great detail. :)

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There is a problem between copy-and-pasting between word and HPOCC. They were all there I swear!! Hmm I was making this a musical but I liked the story and it didn't fit the song, so I might do a date one later...this was a 1004 words so I might wait a little later. Glad you like it. I am trying new ways to write stories. I will probably go to edit and fix that....MY BAD!

-- Edited by sophiana tsuki on Tuesday 24th of November 2009 10:15:01 PM

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this one is reeeeealy good.

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Thanks, I like this on thought my favorite is Melodys Heart.


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