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Tattoos and the fact that I don't care

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What can I do to improve my writingg skills and suggestions-

Sophiana took the hair band from her head and threw it on the mail table with her keys, a magazine, and a bill. She set her bag on the armed chair and walked into the kitchen she grabbed to remote and flipped on the muggle news. She sighed and rubbed her hands together and she thought about dinner. Sophiana thought about it and grabbed a tomato from the produce basket on the counter and walked to the refrigerator the light flipped on and she pulled the drawer open, a pulled out a chicken breast. She turned on the range and pulled a pan from the hanger above her head, filled with pots, pans, and woks. The flame lit up in the stove as she poured olive oil into the pan and turned it on  to spread it. She left the kitchen and sat on the couch. She brushed her hair back and laid her head on the edge of the couch she sighed she was tired from all day on her feet trying to remember what the customers wanted in the bouquets and floral arrangements. Her eyelids fell closed and she heard a crash in the kitchen. She slowly pulled herself up and grabbed her wand she walked over to the kitchen ready to blow a person to pieces if need be. She looked around the fridge to see the most shocking thing of her life. She stopped dead in her tracks looked at the noise makers the word she had not uttered in years slipped from her agape mouth "Charlie?" Charlie smirked as he walked around the fridge in full view. Sophs?" He leaned on the fridge and held up a bag of fruit gushers "These things will rot your teeth." He threw one up in the air and tried to catch it back in his mouth. He failed so he dramatically caught it in his hand and popped it in his mouth. "They taste bangin' though." Sophiana caught herself on the counter "Charlie? What- what-?" She looked up and sighed "Charlie, what in the world are you doing here in nowhere England?"  He set the tasty snack down on the counter I was looking around, found Smith and he mentioned you, found out where you worked, went there and they told me here. I showed up watched a pay-per view movie, ate some of these gushers, and dropped a pot. He nodded and Sophiana looked at the stove. She shook her head and looked at him I thought I would never see you again. I mean it has been, what 5 years? He looked up and nodded Give or Take depends on your view. He looked at her and pushed up his glasses. So back to the point, I came back to tell you that, I really do miss you and would really like to get back together. He sadly looked in her eyes; he turned and examined the fridge. Sophiana lost in thought snapped back What is so interesting on my fridge? Charlie looked up Looking for boyfriend pictures. Sophiana looked at the fridge nope, one with Alice, and one with Hazel and Kairu. But no all the bfs pics are gone. He nodded and looked back at Sophiana she opened her mouth but was cut off by the fire alarm. She squealed and looked at the stove which was smoking she reached for her wand and stopped it smokey fire and alarm. Charlie laughed You havent changed. Sophiana smiled and walked over to hug him she looked at him and sniffled Yep, I think it may be cool to try this again. Charlie looked at the failed chicken meal. I will take you out. He rummaged in his pocket, I have 4.89. Sophiana laughed Do you even have a job? He looked around Well I do but, it isnt very good, I am working at a toy store. Sophiana laughed You are really bad with kids, Charlie. He shrugged People ask where a DVD is and I point to the DVD section, it is pretty easy. Sophiana shrugged I am working at a florist place. She grabbed her purse Let us go find a dinner for under $5



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I like this one even better than the melody one.

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Hmm I find it...off.... glad u like it i do not really.

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Go to Micky D's.


i do like this one. Its happier than the other.

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Dollar value menu!!!!

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That wasn't really the point, but yeah they would i guess. Does anyone have anything about writing to add?

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I know, buuuuuttt, I had to add it. I think its pretty good already. the main problem is punctuation, and that's probably just your keyboard being funny.

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Alot of the stuff didn't copy right, and i do have a probalm with run on sentences.

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i think its good. but like Hazel said punctuation is key.

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Like use of commas, periods, and hyphens? Or speak or what?

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commas, periods, Quotaion marks and stuff like that

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